THE MAN WITH THE WATCHES
(SIR ARTHUR CONAN DOYLE)
This tale happened in
England about 1892, people had been interested to read news, and they felt
interested on the first page because there they found the mind of news was
happening in that time.
In that time called the
attention of was the news about the train, that it had to travel from one city
to another but it was a dark night and wilder, the time was very bad that only
travel for necessity; John Palmer was the guard train, this man was a point to
give signal to engine driver to move, when he reached to see 2 people, they
were running to the train, they were an older nan and young woman.
CHAPTER TWO
When they are in the train
the guard attended them and the guard took them at the carriage the first
class. When they opened the carriage they can see a man smoking, the tall man
said that the girl does not like smoke, so the guard gave them other empty
carriage. The train stopped twice and finally it arrived to the last station,
there the train had an examination compartment by compartment, when they
discovered that the smoke man does not
was there and the last couple that arrives in the train were disappear too.
In the compartment where
were the tall man and the woman was founded a died man, he was death for a
bullet in his heart and he had not document to recognize him, he was wearing
soft cloths and no one can see him before.
CHAPTER THREE
In the cloth of the die man
was founded 6 pockets, it contained 6 watches, some were American, too was founded
a knife, a mirror, a silver box of matches, cigars, money. He had the
appearance young, short, smooth, cheeked and delicately feature on of his teeth
contain gold.
All the tickets were contained
and only three tickets disappear; the guard John Palmer was detained for the
inspector Vane and Mr. Henderson as a witness at Rugby. For that crime no one
founded traces in the train and in the London Press only say speculation.
CHAPTER FOUR
The guard said that on the
train he never saw strange movement on the platform but he remembered that the
line where the train had to pass, it was in repair, when the train gad pas for
there had pass slowly, in that moment people had de opportunity to cross the
one platform and other, this suggest was useful to get information.
In this place where had in
repair was founded a small pocket testament an in say from John to Alice but it
was not enough to the investigation.
CHAPTER FIVE
People in England were full of suggestion and absurd about the crime.
For the watches founded people said that the man died, he was
American and he was a thief. Other people think that he was hidden and in the compartment
on the train and many people travel there, maybe there traveled spies and they
were talking about their secrets and they saw him hidden so they killed him to do
not leaf evidences.
The investigation follows the path and people continued, imagining
several fantasies about the man of the watches.
CHAPTER SIX
Now people continued
suggestive things about the fact. There are two trains ones is a local and
another is the express, both have same direction and people reconstruct the
fact seeing that the man of the watches was alone, never found the ticket maybe
he lost it, and he was American.
People continued said that the
man was sitting in a train when he soon can see. The woman that he was in love
and she was with the older man that he hated; when both trains were in front,
he opened the door and jumped to another train., then people imagine the men fighter,
until the older man shot the weapon in on young man and he took the woman, they
jumped the train when it was passing for the bad way.
CHAPTER SEVEN
The other hand, there is other
theory about the man in the smoking carriage, probably that this man can see when
the young man jumped the train and too saw when the older man shot the young
man and he saw the older man and woman to jump to the train and he pick up the
bag and jumped too police never found the ticket and the theory about the local
train never run parallel to the express These theory there aren´t satisfying
last time the investigator received a letter dated from New york.
CHAPTER EIGHT
The letter contained a lot of
information about a family that had two sons, James and Edward. James is the person
that tells us the story. James was the elder; his mother was permissive with Edward.
Edward has a friend call MacCoy,both were thieve, James did all things to help
his brother but the help was unnecessary because he continued doing mistakes;
his brother was actor and he gad the skills to dress as a woman.
CHAPTER NINE
His brother does not stop, he
continued dong mistakes, such as forge a name upon a cheque ,James for avoid
his brother was in a prison , pay a lot of money for brother ‘mistakes. One day, Edward promised to change
to doesn´t broke mother´s heart; one family friend helped Edward in a business
of American watches and Edward was sent off with samples of watches to London-
It was a good idea to keep Edward far of McCoy’s.
Time pass, and one day James
hear that McCoy was in England, so James thought that McCoy’s was an influence
on Edward and he took the decision to go to England. Last night his mother and he
were in prayer and his mother gave to him the testament the same his father
gave her of the marriage.
CHAPTER TEN
James traveled to Europe because
his brother was living and working in London because he doesn´t wanted that his
brother and McCoy doesn´t founded to McCoy, he was with 12 fellows, who worked
to him in Europe, James hated this man for their brother, and he came to
England to avoid troubles with his brother, now his brother is working with his
watches.
CHAPTER ELEVEN
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James looked the time-table and he could see that the
last one train left at 4:35; all the time James thought in search them in
hotels and he thought to follow them in Manchester. He thought that when he founded
his brother he would ask for the promise that he made at his mother and him.
They were a good actor, they always were disguised, because they know that the police was
searching them, MacCoy worn a great
astrakhan collar and he worn a cloth that covered your face that only can see
his nice and his eyes, his brother was like a woman, his face was covered for a
veil, at the moment McCoy recognized James, then they made a question to the conductor, and then walked at
the next compartment; when the train
arrived at Willesden James changed the compartment, when were MacCoy and this brother Edward. They
don´t surprised when James appeared into the compartment, MacCoy set his brother
in against James. James only pictured how he was told his mother about his brother;
he thought about his brother in a goal in England, he made all to do his
brother changed.
CHAPTER TWELVE
James gave his brother a lot of advice, because he loved
his brother, he wanted that his brother
was a correct person, he wanted the best for him, always he tried to help his brother but his brother always wanted to get the money the
others ways; but James continued saying pain things, because James doesn´t
wanted to see to Edward in a goal, and he wanted the his
brother studied to became in a good man,
James said a lot of things that he made his brother to cry, James told his brother that MacCoy
was a bad influence for him.
CHAPTER THERTEEN
His brother continued very excited and crying and with a quickly
movement get out his revolver and James jumped and Edward fired and the bullet
through heart´s Edward, they were terrified and they touch the body and they
discovered that he was died, in this moment the train going very slowly, they
without thinking, they jumped out, given round and round on the ground. MacCoy
told James that he knew that he loved his brother very much, but MacCoy said to
Edward that he loved to Edward more than him.
CHAPTER FOURTEEN
James continued talking about the schedule, the ticket
was not founder because it was in MacCoy pocket and his cloth were very cheaper
because to American is very expensive brought it from EEUU, they buy cheaper
about the watches were a business that he had with American man, too police
founded a small mirror but it is comment to a young man to take it. This day
the traffic accident we walked and MacCoy went to Cairo and I returned to Nueva
York. His mother died before 6 months and James never told her anything about
his brother; she died with the name of the Edward on her lips.
CHAPTER FIFTEEN
In the letter, James continued telling at the
investigator, that terrible day, he took in his pocket and important testament
that contain important information for him about his family, James told the
investigator that paper are very important for him if the investigator can to
send the papers at the same address of the letter.

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